one quibble; i can't read some of the text even when i enlarge the image: the black words merge with the black lines in background (trees and so forth)
don't think I expressed myself correctly just then, but i think you get the idea
I kinda hoped you'd used the falling from bridge ability frolm Gokstad instead of Poorly Made.
I noticed you're using sort of narration, but constructed like in some pokemon game.
Rhanya with her baby appears!
Rhanya begins chanting!
It's super effective!
etc
__________________
Pizdzius Swedzioszek Leader of CBA Regnum Comic <- my Regnum Comic ,RSS version -> RSS
(if you wish to contact me on my other realm character: Ignis - Josephine)